tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post778536264737542973..comments2023-10-01T10:40:34.682-04:00Comments on Asteria's Blog: My First Teaser Tuesday!elizabethisaacshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04346420883881647489noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post-62653314582616255182010-07-13T17:00:20.325-04:002010-07-13T17:00:20.325-04:00Thank you all so much for your kind comments. I ha...Thank you all so much for your kind comments. I have a feeling that Teaser Tuesday is going to be one of my favorite days of the week! If you haven't checked it out on twitter, go to #teasertuesday. There is some great work out there, so enjoy!elizabethisaacshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04346420883881647489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post-81558901547601972452010-07-13T15:47:56.619-04:002010-07-13T15:47:56.619-04:00Great excerpt. I could definitely feel the tension...Great excerpt. I could definitely feel the tension. Thanks for sharing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655284707586515591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post-1259617107290975542010-07-13T14:01:56.283-04:002010-07-13T14:01:56.283-04:00I agree, this was a great teaser! It definitely he...I agree, this was a great teaser! It definitely held the tension and at the very end I let out a sigh of relief :) The only thing that caught my eye to critique was "Leaves shuffled to the left..." (the visual of them doing that, literally, pulled me out momentarily). <br /><br />Thanks so much for doing #teasertuesday and for the wonderful explanation and plug you gave on your blog :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post-34815978684588164002010-07-13T11:34:29.390-04:002010-07-13T11:34:29.390-04:00This is a great teaser. I wouldn't have known...This is a great teaser. I wouldn't have known which excerpt to use as there are so many phenomenal moments in this story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15503983929060706933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post-10283585147309804922010-07-13T11:12:21.635-04:002010-07-13T11:12:21.635-04:00Thanks for allowing us to read an excerpt from you...Thanks for allowing us to read an excerpt from your book. I love the intensity. Your sense of description is right on. Everything fits. And I especially like the narrator's dialogue towards the end. It's clear that her mind is racing and her grip on reality is being tested. This is such a believeable moment--when fear and logic meet.<br />I'd definitely like to see more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post-2131911369251381152010-07-13T09:37:14.444-04:002010-07-13T09:37:14.444-04:00Love this excerpt!!!
Can't wait to read the e...Love this excerpt!!!<br /><br />Can't wait to read the entire book!!!Anginoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837838881706049457.post-8317928808476389752010-07-12T22:57:23.695-04:002010-07-12T22:57:23.695-04:00The Light Of Asteria: Kailmeyra's Last Hope is...The Light Of Asteria: Kailmeyra's Last Hope is on my TBr list. Looking forward to reading the book.rbooth43https://www.blogger.com/profile/13397822821356862700noreply@blogger.com